It Was a Torturous Journey Of Hardship And Discovery

[twilightpony]

With Rarity's help I've finished the rewrite of the Canterlot Explorer's Society article. Or I should say that _we_ finished it. Rarity put quite a bit of pulpy drama into it. We tested it out on Rainbow Dash (who's in a bit of a funk right now since her tortoise is hibernating) and she perked up a bit. But not for long. It reminded her of the Daring Do stories she'd read to her tortoise. So, success? We should have found somepony else to test it on.

Come what may, it's done, sealed, and mailed. I hope it doesn't come back.

Comments

[algernon97]

If it reminded her of an action-adventure novel, the society will probably accept it.

[twilightpony]

I hope so.

[flareblitzfury]

My hopes are with you there!

[twilightpony]

Thanks!