Being There

[twilightpony]

My draft article for the Canterlot Explorer's Society publication is back. The editor and the referees have penciled in lots of notes and arrows, changing my phrasing here and there and making several requests that I expand some things and shorten others. "Quote things said by your yak guide and the rescued explorers, in their own words". "Say how this made you feel", "what were you thinking at the time", "I can't feel the hardship here".

What is this, psychotherapy?

Well, I stuck my hoof into this, I'm going to slog through it. You'd think this Society would be more interested in how to choose the right snow to make building blocks for a caribou snow-stable than how often my stomach grumbled and how afraid I was that my hooves would freeze off. Maybe I'll throw in one of Machur and Pinkie's jokes.